College Magazine - Mock up Design

Here Is My First Mock Up Of A College Magazine. I firstly decided that the name of the magazine would go at the top and to a slant i thought one side of the title could be bigger than the other to create the effect that one side is nearer than the other. I thought it would make my magazine look different and stand out on the shelf.
I then decided that i would have a picture in the centre with the main focus of the image in the middle of the page. Then i would have my towards the bottom of the page i would put the at different slants to keep in keeping with the title. i would then put the bar code on the right hand side under the title.